Evaluation for 7.B.3c
Materials include systematic and explicit (direct) opportunities for students to engage in increasingly complex sentence-level writing, revising, and editing. (S)
Materials provide systematic and explicit (direct) opportunities for students to engage in increasingly complex sentence-level writing, revising, and editing, using modeled examples, structured protocols, and a clear progression across the school year. In Academic Week 1, students "begin writing four types of simple sentences," focusing on "simple declarative sentences and their attributes." By Academic Week 2, instruction advances to "simple and/or compound sentences," and by Academic Week 3, students "compose simple, compound, or complex sentences." This sequence ensures consistent practice and increasing sentence complexity. Sentence-level revision is explicitly taught through Show, Don't Tell techniques, where students learn to "strengthen their writing at the sentence level by using strong verbs, vocabulary, emotions, and/or dialogue rather than telling about a story or event." For example, in Academic Week 2, students "revise, edit, publish opinion paragraphs," applying these revision strategies to their own writing. The revising and editing bingo card provides focused revision tasks such as "add a prepositional phrase to the beginning of one of your sentences," "clarify a sentence by reorganizing the words or phrases," and "find a splice and turn it into two simple sentences." These explicit, scaffolded opportunities build skill with complex sentence-level editing. The Writing the Flows presentation guides editing and revision, beginning with "editing skills (subject-verb agreement, splices, run-ons, and fragments)." Students first review incorrect sentences and practice editing them. Students then apply the editing skill to a previously written sentence on their own paper." The Sentence Writing Checklist directs students to "edit and revise for subject/verb agreement, ending punctuation, beginning capitalization, conjunctions, and attributes of declarative, interrogative, exclamatory, imperative, compound, and complex sentences." As students demonstrate mastery, instruction continues with regular opportunities to compose and edit compound and complex sentences. By Academic Week 11, students independently "compose, revise, and edit" multi-paragraph compositions, such as a letter from the perspective of a blizzard survivor, finalizing their writing through the full process of drafting, revising, editing, and publishing.